Jan 12, 2016
Hi! My name is Diana Ochoa and I'm an English student. This video will be about me, my family, my friends and my likes. I recorded it over 20 times, but this was the best. If I have mistakes, I'd be glad if you tell me about them. I've recorded videos in Spanish, but this was the first time I made a video in English and I uploaded it to YouTube.
Sometimes I speak with my sister, but she doesn't speak English, so I try to use others words. I'm not fluent, I know so, but I hope to improve in short! Well... watch the video!
Recording a video is more difficult I thought. Thinking about you want to talk about is important because if you don't decide the topics, you'll only speak of random things or you'll forget something. I wrote all the ideas that I wanted to tell you in a sheet of paper, but, even so, I have mistakes.
Time ago, I thought to create a YouTube channel, where I'd talk about my hometown and so I could practice my English. I think this is a good chance that this project come true.
Please, let your comment in my blog.
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ReplyDeletehi! Diana, your video is good, but I listened some mistakes, when you describe a place it's used the word " small place", when you say what are you studind you have to say "at the university".
DeleteAnd just try to be quiet, you can improve with practise.
Hello Diana I think that your video it,s good too, like the commentary of Jaqueline, yes, you can improve your speaking like said Jaqueline if you practise all the time, all the time really you will improve your english Remember this sentence the practise make to the teacher.
ReplyDeleteHello Diana, I think that your video is good, because you aren't nervous and your pronunciation is very well.
ReplyDeleteGreat video my friend! But you can check the pronunciation of town and tongue c: and also check some expressions. Finally great job, your english is very good and if you keep practicing will be better
ReplyDeleteYour video is good! :D
ReplyDeleteHi! good video but I can see that you have some problems in your pronunciation.
ReplyDeletethe gramatical structure in your sentences is right
Hi Diana, I think that your video is good, but the time is different. According to the teacher, we shoul use only one time explain our ideas. I can see that you have some problems in your pronunciation. You need more practice!
ReplyDeleteIn general it is a good job, that is all.
Hi Diana!
ReplyDeleteThe time that you use to explain your ideas should be the same. I can see that you have some problems in your pronunciation, for example, I listened that you said "allt" and the correct pronunciation is "all". You need more practice to improve your English. You can do it!